response to peer editing.

Honestly, I did not get as much feedback as I would have liked to. Most of the comments were for grammatical errors and the like. There were some points where issues of clarity were noted, which I really appreciate because its easy to overlook those. As the writer of my paper, it is so easy to understand the point that I am trying to make and to overlook that fact that there is major ambiguity with the point I am actually making. This weekend I plan to really dissect and analyse my paper. I plan to read it aloud several times to find the errors and to physically break the pages apart into their sections and try to find the best fit for them. Also, I will try to receive feedback from more than one of my peers when it gets closer to the actual paper deadline. My work is still a work in progress and I hope this weekend to hammer out a lot of progress.